Great Thebes,the mighty walled, I see
The seven gated town...
where brothers reigining annually ..passed too and fro the crown
Till Eteocles,despite the law...refuses with a frown
and the mighty Polyneices wars.. they burnt the city to the ground
The champions of argos, strive before each fearsome gate
Of seven who'll remain alive, is in the hands of fate
The brothers,at each others hand,are both for hades bound
Among those who come from much distant lands, two much missed friends are found
Tydeus,fighting axe in hand,is wounded by a foe - Melannipus, who makes a stand and lays the hero low..
but not before the axe in hand, has drunk it's longed for draft of blood
and severed from it's mighty trunk.. a head rolls in the mud
A final act of vengance when, before he meets his bane
the dead man's skull is spilt and Tydeus eats his brain
Amphiaraus,the god's own seer,fights firecely in the squall
and knowing that his end is near, triumphs over all !
A useless guesture, then he knows,avoiding fate to flee ?
for Zeus follows where he goes.. his thunderbolts the key
When lightning strikes, the earth will spasm,and he can only drive...
his steeds into a gaping chasm.. into hell alive
And greeted there upon the bank by the boatman of old,
who cares not for the trouble above and demands his ransom of gold.
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Thought i'd get morbid in a more accepetable fashion this time :)
my personal favourite bit is the brains eating one :) I actually got the idea from a comic i was reading in office(!!!shh) and i found the story pretty interesting so i quickly googled it...
It's based on the story of "the Seven against Thebes" and "Eteocles and the Polyneices wars"
Incase your interested in the actual story, i refer you to a wiki link :
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seven_Against_Thebes
and a google books link :
http://books.google.co.in/books?id=3xGfiqR5rjAC&pg=PA107&lpg=PA107&dq=Polyneices+wars&source=bl&ots=ZIIlcS4PPx&sig=NrPkynEv0M-VpAjFgxzWTHqgIEw&hl=en&ei=-dewSoaQK6iG6AP0wtzfAQ&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=1#v=onepage&q=Polyneices%20wars&f=false
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Beautifully composed...kudos!
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